How exciting it was to receive a couple of Hakka 3Lines poems for the first time from a sixty something woman resident of Kuanshi. The poems were brought to my office by Ms.Chang herself in my absence, so I haven’t met her as yet. . Very good poems, you see. She promised to come again and talk with me about Hakka poems. OK, let share her masterpieces with our friends through Internet and Hakka Magazine, if possible..
人生个道路
細心細義莫行歪
正有光明好將來
阿姆手中菜
酸甜苦辣共鑊來
大細食到心花開
阿爸个肩頭
千斤擔頭佢來垓 (垓 kai 借用字 應該是首部才對)
流血流汗也忍耐
張靜惠 撰稿
With regards,
CS Lou 6/23/2010
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張靜惠女士的三行詩，意味深遠，確是耐人尋味的客俳。正如同您的主張，既然稱之為小詩，當以合仄押韻為尚，雖然自由體俳句，並不如何講究這面限制，然而就如同即興、脫口而出的山歌，或一二四、或二四句押韻，唱起來韻味十足，令人百聽不厭。客俳僅三行，是當全押韻，或二三句押韻，值得探討，或隨興而作亦可，畢竟這只是開始，能有更多人嘗試，豈不即達到羅先生發起創作三行詩的初衷?張女士對人生體驗、對父母感懷，留意韻腳的三行詩，我很喜歡。
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