Wednesday, May 19, 2010

故鄉

故鄉在關西
石光旱圳出生地
久別親友思念深
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Ventura 海灘長
漫步沙灘聽波濤
觀賞衝浪伴海鷗
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春日海濱遊
赤腳沙灘漫步行
遠眺衝浪逐波來


James 5/18/2010
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  1. Pon Fon ChaMay 19, 2010 at 3:04 PM

    春日海濱遊
    赤腳沙灘漫步行
    遠眺衝浪逐波來
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    Dear James: this one seems not so Hakka.
    Could I try to use different words?

    春日海唇聊
    赤腳沙灘漫步行
    遠看衝浪滕波飊

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  2. Pon Fon ChaMay 19, 2010 at 3:14 PM

    Hello James:
    This poem is good...can I try to have my version?

    Ventura 海灘長
    漫步沙灘聽波濤
    觀賞衝浪伴海鷗
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    Ventura - pronounced 3 word: ven tu ra
    So I will change to:

    Ventura 長灘
    觀賞衝浪伴海鳥
    漫步海唇聽浪聲

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