Sunday, March 2, 2014

水毛 濛湮 霧氣 晨光 火山島

溫柔落水毛
微風吹過椰樹間
轉向輕輕jim面頰。(Jim or jib 吻）

濛湮走奈去
山腰霧氣遮晨光
半晝消（燒）散山頭現。

後生火山島
萬年風雨刻火山
綠色山脊(背）像利刀。

大島Hawaii
熔岩添海增陸地
一年增加幾下尺。

關西 陳秋鴻  3/1/2014

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  1. Hakka 3 Line PoemMarch 2, 2014 at 8:39 AM

    Hi, Dennis,
    Nice poems and beautiful Hawaiian landscape, the sea, the beach and the mountain range that did remind me of my twice trips there a decade or two ago.
    Just one word for your reference, 挲(so)，轉向輕輕來挲面, just a hint.
    Thank you for your cooperation.
    Have a good day,
    CS Lou

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  2. Hakka 3 Line PoemMarch 2, 2014 at 8:45 AM

    From CS Lou -

    來到真珠灣 (The pearl Harbour)
    想起大東亞戰爭
    多少冤魂冇奈投

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