作詩打嘴鼓
跈等詩伴入詩境
雲端回響幾生趣
學生顧考試
成年立業築家庭
望子成功過一生
晚年到處遶
大千世界遶毋透
眼界大開來喊囉 (喊好上天囉)
人生就會死
幾時來去命註定
講冇計較敢有影
Hi, Dennis, I like your poems very much.
You are a poet by nature, expecting your H3LP at all times.
CS Lou, 2017/09/16
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